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How good is your Cebuano-Binisaya?  Mine is as rusty as one can imagine. 


I'm in the process of finalizing the collation of titles to be included in my upcoming book of poetry. The question is shall I include the lyrics below (attached)?


Tally so far => Yes = 1; No = 1; Canvassing ends 7-Mar-16, 14:15 hrs New York Time (Eastern Standard Time).


It’s the only piece I have written in Binisaya and shall be the only non-English entry in the book.  Your honest review of the lyrics shall earn my eternal gratitude and for punishment entitle you to a signed copy of the book when finally published.